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Re: What must be improved?
Reply #2 - 02/08/10 at 20:19:09
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kylemeister wrote on 02/08/10 at 17:49:39:
Well, the first thing I notice (aside from the fact that this is a rapid game) is that you ended up in a main line a tempo down (due to 10...Be6 followed by 11...f5), which should be rather significant.



Thanks kylemeister. Of course the move order is wrong!

this is the startposition --->


10. Nd5 f5 11. Bd3 Be6 12. O-O Bxd5 13. exd5 Ne7 14. c3 Bg7 15. Qh5 e4 16. Bc2 Qc8 17. Rae1 O-O *

  
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Re: What must be improved?
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Well, the first thing I notice (aside from the fact that this is a rapid game) is that you ended up in a main line a tempo down (due to 10...Be6 followed by 11...f5), which should be rather significant.
  
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What must be improved?
02/08/10 at 17:42:38
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Dear fellow addict!

This is a game i just finished against fritz. 

What must be improved from black?

- length in counting?
- opening theory?
- positional understanding?
- is black playing good or bad?
- what rating would you guess black player as?
- and
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- so on! ???

for any comments or help i would be greatful.

[Event "Blitz 5m+20s"]
[White "Fritz 10"]
[Black "Toppace"]
[Result "1-0"]
[PlyCount "53"]
[TimeControl "300+20"]

{50MB, Power08.ctg, ROAARTIS-181CNI} 1. e4 {0} c5 {2} 2. Nf3 {0} Nc6 {2} 3. d4
{0} cxd4 {2} 4. Nxd4 {0} Nf6 {3} 5. Nc3 {0} e5 {2} 6. Ndb5 {0} d6 {2} 7. Bg5 {0
} a6 {6} 8. Na3 {0} b5 {1} 9. Bxf6 {0} gxf6 {2} 10. Nd5 {0} Be6 {12} 11. c3 {0}
f5 {16} 12. exf5 {0} Bxf5 {4} 13. Qf3 {0} Be6 {13} 14. Nf6+ {0} Ke7 {9} 15. Nc2
{0} Bg7 {15} 16. Nh5 {57} Rg8 {0} 17. Qxc6 {29} d5 {42} 18. Nb4 {43} d4 {114}
19. Nxa6 {74} Bh6 {21} 20. f4 {38} exf4 {90} 21. Nc7 {37} d3 {49} 22. Nxa8 {28}
d2+ {17} 23. Kd1 {50} Bg4+ {0} 24. Be2 {106} Bxe2+ {56} 25. Kxe2 {1} Qxa8 {0}
26. Qxa8 {26} Rxa8 {5} 27. Rhf1 {15} 1-0

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